"This is a well-written and creative piece, with an imaginative setting
and believable characters. I feel it could easily be turned into
something much bigger, with the interpreter and the sisterhood having enough potential to fill a novel or more. Although we decided in the end that it wasn't a fit for us, I enjoyed reading it,
and I hope you'll consider sending us more of your work some time."
Don't get me wrong---I'm delighted to get such positive feedback. I'd just be more delighted if someone would actually buy one of my stories.